Other than that it was decent at best.READERReport 2006-06-14 16:23:14I think this story is all right for a first time writer. xnx 10 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-05 20:36:285/10…you would’ve gotten a whole ten but you screwed up by placing ‘@’ instead of just spelling out the word…and it needed more details. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-05 20:36:285/10…you would’ve gotten a whole ten but you screwed up by placing ‘@’ instead of just spelling out the word…and it needed more details. Other than that it was decent at best.READERReport 2006-06-14 16:23:14I think this story is all right for a first time writer. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2006-10-05 20:36:285/10…you would’ve gotten a whole ten but you screwed up by placing ‘@’ instead of just spelling out the word…and it needed more details. im really looking forward to the sequelREADERReport 2006-06-10 00:11:26it was good, but be a little more descripive and dont use @ and it needs to be a tad
