also sentences end with a period not a comma. xnx also sentences end with a period not a comma. also sentences end with a period not a comma. I did do differenty paragraphs, but didnt think to put an express space between each of them. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. Thanks for the advce, check back with me in the future, I’ll put it to good use.READERReport 2006-06-16 00:17:33wheres the s&m?«12» not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. ” Spell Check would have
