Im not sure if thats where you were going to do anyway but just a suggestions. Your building up to the inevitable sex scene very well, just keep doing what your doing. xnx This got away from the first subject, added other characters that I don’t really care about reading. … Keep up the good work.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 02:13:20Great story, please make another part soon! I think it would be interesting to have one of sally’s children be victorias teammate and at the sleepover on her birthday. I was hoping he’d choose Vicky over Sally but now it seems that he’ll stay with both.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 19:10:15Keep it up man pleaseanonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 15:00:46I think the first episode went up like a sky rocket…and the next parts just came down. …like a sky rocket. … Your building up to the inevitable sex scene very well, just keep doing what your doing.
