16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-12 23:37:07Other than a few disturbing grammer mistakes it was good. duh«1234» duh«1234» it read cold and without emotion, almost done with anger. Xxnx duh«1234» 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-10-14 18:02:54dark and disturbing. didn’t even seem like he enjoyed it, rather more of an empty act, void of emotion. 8/10anonymous readerReport 2011-10-14 18:02:54dark and disturbing. You’ve crossed a line.READERReport 2006-10-26 00:46:37Write another chapter & have her live with the man while he teaches her all the facets of what sex really isREADERReport 2006-01-13 22:19:19hey reader the hyman is inside a womens vagina dumb ass. it read cold and without emotion, almost done with anger. if it wasnt how do you think we are able to use tampons before loosing our virginity. 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-12 23:37:07Other than a few disturbing grammer mistakes it was good.
