Writing, style, grammar, and descriptive passages were all but spot on. You are building this up slow and steady, yet fast enough to keep most enticed. Xxnx Writing, style, grammar, and descriptive passages were all but spot on. 21 comments«12345»fuckorsexReport 2015-11-03 17:57:01nice one .,its comingAnonymous readerReport 2014-08-15 00:32:14Read Senior Year by this writer and loved it so am reading the rest of his stories. Just don’t rush it. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to be an excellent story. Just don’t rush it. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to
