better use of word play or maybe even some sort of poem style..READERReport 2005-03-13 16:18:23I think you’re story is good. xnx personally i don’t swing for stories like this but man that was irresistably hot… 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-05 09:25:32Lead me to the wine cellar.READERReport 2007-03-23 23:14:07great concept but poorly articulated… It’s not the typical type of story we see here. better use of word play or maybe even some sort of poem style..READERReport 2005-03-13 16:18:23I think you’re story is good. i think i got a few new ideas for my girlfriend just from the first 4 paragraphs of the main persons perspective of what that stuff does to her body«12» we have true feelings involed, instead of the bull shit we read on here everyday This is 1 hot story.READERReport 2005-01-14 14:15:22This was very erotic and what does it matter about the English it was open and sincere as to how
