Your don’t speak English. xnx Idea and concept are great, execution is horrible.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:19:03You separated the big block of text but the story is still filled with wrong words and words that are out of order. So it is still a pain in the ass to try and read. You seriously need to get an English speaking person to proof read for you before you post anything. Which raises the question as to why are you posting stories then?«1» Idea and concept are great, execution is horrible.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 23:19:03You separated the big block of text but the story is still filled with wrong words and words that are out of order. Seems to me he would be pissed that you beat him up and then fucked his girlfriend, not be his hero.
