🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. I’m not bagging on you, I’m just saying you’ve got a lot to work on. Xnxx.com I find it hard to believe you would be satisfied with this story if you reread it yourself. She’s way too full of herself. …and ‘Cum on my PRETTY face? . . …I gave it a thumbs down. …anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 04:19:37I liked the story, however, as a writer, there are some things I want to point out for you to improve upon. Still, pretty good, I’m just here to make it better.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:50:39the story built up nicely until you got to the sex part and then it went along too fast with a poor description of the sex itself. . . . . . … To start, the tab key exists for a reason.
