p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . Xxnx . …is english a second language to you?? But this story is poorly written. …evidently from a boy younger than 24. …if you’re older…go back and finish high school!Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-06 07:43:49The story line is good, but, the writing is terrible.«12» p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . . …is english a second language to you?? Agree with the first comment…who caught you? Agree with the first comment…who caught you? p.leaselearn to werite p[roperlyAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-06 11:42:36Crappy writing . . …is english a second language to you?? But this story is poorly written. …evidently from a boy younger than 24. …if you’re older…go back and finish high school!Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-06 07:43:49The story line is good, but, the writing is terrible.«12» Agree with the first comment…who caught you?
