22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. And also switching from first to third person view.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-23 03:05:20Hard to enjoy the story with the horrendous spelling and the switching back and forth from first person and third person perspectives.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-09 23:43:04It feels like The Dead Zone and Fucked Out of Coma had a kid.«12345» Correct that and then you would have a lovely story.Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 12:05:18A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit. Xxnx 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-06 14:29:22A good story but as already mentioned the spelling and the person view changing spoilt it a bit.
