Looking forward to the third chapter.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 11:13:22Nice work!! Xxnx Looking forward to the third chapter.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 11:13:22Nice work!! it seems to need an ending. As someone suggested a foursome up on the mountain. just a suggestion.«12» then they could all live happily ever after. The paragraphs just seem to run together. However this format is very difficult to read. And I’d like to see a third chapter. And I’d like to see a third chapter. then they could all live happily ever after. As someone suggested a foursome up on the mountain. Looking forward to the third chapter.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 11:13:22Nice work!! it seems to need an ending. And I’d like to see a third chapter. Looking forward to the third chapter.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-10 11:13:22Nice work!! And I’d like to see a third chapter.
