dw«12» I encourage you to continue with your story and not let others deter you. dw«12» After all you are telling a story, and the readers who criticize your writing skills aren’t very skillful at reading between the lines. Xnxx.com 5/10.READERReport 2006-08-13 08:14:50yep, plot is good rendition needs polishing,perhaps you might like to get someone to edit your next one to make the story easier to read, give you 9 for effort.READERReport 2006-07-18 15:46:17I think your introductory story is kind of “Good” to be honest with you; aside from a few grammatical flaws it is “Good”. I encourage you to continue with your story and not let others deter you. dw«12» I encourage you to continue with your story and not let others deter you.
Actors:
Akiko Miyake / Nobuo Yamada
