I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. 29 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-05-11 23:07:41Great story…I just don’t like how she immediately forgave him. Xnxx.com Really? Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 18:47:21Hey, I really like this. Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-24 18:47:21Hey, I really like this. Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-23 05:40:26it was alright..I wish it were longer..write another?READERReport 2008-02-15 04:20:29it was fairly good, you will get better in time, but i must say it was too short.«12345» Really? Don’t listen to most of the other negative comments…they were probably just pissed b/c of the repeats. I like how you incorporate emotion, specifically guilt- I like those elements in a rape story. I agree you could’ve made it longer though. Good job!Anonymous readerReport 2008-07-23 05:40:26it was alright..I wish it were longer..write another?READERReport 2008-02-15 04:20:29it was fairly good, you will get better in time, but i must say it was too
