Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again. just write the storyanonymous readerReport 2013-09-02 02:53:59Holy shit! Xxx Glad to see the comments from Derek and the hostility with the dad, but also glad to see it get settled. good start to this one. Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again. good start to this one. Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again.
Actors:
Hiroshi Tanaka / Risa Suzuki
