hurry with chapter twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-22 02:43:41weak story,but it was a good try«1» hurry with chapter twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-22 02:43:41weak story,but it was a good try«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 22:09:02It was a good story, though could have possibly been a little more lengthier.IronrunnerReport 2009-08-10 13:19:54Well written for a first time teenaged au5hor. hurry with chapter twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-22 02:43:41weak story,but it was a good try«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 22:09:02It was a good story, though could have possibly been a little more lengthier.IronrunnerReport 2009-08-10 13:19:54Well written for a first time teenaged au5hor. Xnxx hurry with chapter twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-22 02:43:41weak story,but it was a good try«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 22:09:02It was a good story, though could have possibly been a little more lengthier.IronrunnerReport 2009-08-10 13:19:54Well written for a first time teenaged au5hor.
