And, to the haters, um, you’re trolls. You described more about the black man than anyone else! Xxx I don’t wanna vote cause I don’t think you deserve a negative or positive vote.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 19:46:48Mr. Other than Beth having brown hair, I don’t remember ANY details about what they look like. Part of writing is telling a story, and that generally involves letting the readers SEE the characters. I just smiled and laughed, but never had the heart to break it to the snobby punk that I had already claimed what he was after!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 22:29:16Not bad but not as good as it couldve been. Other than that, not bad.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 09:36:15Needs some structure work (spelling, grammar, etc) but decent story. Who ARE these people?
