3 comments«1»Stealth EagleReport 2017-04-27 02:17:22FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. Xnxx Also you need to do a deeper character study with several of your characters to flesh them out. 3 comments«1»Stealth EagleReport 2017-04-27 02:17:22FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. Also you need to do a deeper character study with several of your characters to flesh them out. 3 comments«1»Stealth EagleReport 2017-04-27 02:17:22FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. 3 comments«1»Stealth EagleReport 2017-04-27 02:17:22FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. You need to expand them by about 8 to 10 times. 3 comments«1»Stealth EagleReport 2017-04-27 02:17:22FCE You have some good stories here but they are way too short. Also you need to do a deeper character study with several of your characters to flesh them out.
