Your spelling, grammar, syntax, punctuation, and word usage are horrible. It makes it very hard to read. Xxnx I don’t think that english is your first language. Write more please.Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-25 22:23:13To the person that “couldn’t get past chapter 3”. . . . … Kind of makes us all wonder how full of it you really are. If you can write a better story, prove it, until then, your opinion don’t really matter more than some armchair quarterback watching at home. . . …BigMan7307
Loved the series, would have loved to seen it completed. kind of funny that you make that comment in chapter 29. 26 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-11 10:57:34Good story. Sorry ya’ll. … I didn’t take collegiate english, I happen to speak American, which is different in some aspects.
