adding another male would make it so fucking hot. xnx I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? Usually such traits start exhibiting such behavior in their 20’s unless there has been an abusive father or other authoritian figure guiding such behavior verbally or physically. I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. adding another male would make it so fucking hot. Usually such traits start exhibiting such behavior in their 20’s unless there has been an abusive father or other authoritian figure guiding such behavior verbally or physically.
