(Part 2/2)anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 21:22:42I’m giving it a negative. xnx You may not be a professional author, as you said, but that is still no excuse to have such bad grammar. That’s really all I have to say about it. Take your creations seriously as well. Ultimately, though, it’s up to you whether you want to actually listen or not. Either become better or risk losing your own readers. You asked for criticism, so I’m giving it to you. They’re not professionals either, yet they constantly make professional level work. You may not be a professional author, as you said, but that is still no excuse to have such bad grammar. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 02:31:00really is deleting your account any better than being a coward?anonymous readerReport 2013-05-30 21:31:08My advice would be to not just blow off everything that I’m saying, either. Don’t take the lazy way out and




















