also agree it does need spacing out it would help. also agree it does need spacing out it would help. Xxnx I agree needs to be spaced out a bit and proof read your story for grammar and spelling as best you cananonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 21:56:43enjoyed your story. also agree it does need spacing out it would help. I agree needs to be spaced out a bit and proof read your story for grammar and spelling as best you cananonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 21:56:43enjoyed your story. I agree needs to be spaced out a bit and proof read your story for grammar and spelling as best you cananonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 21:56:43enjoyed your story. but keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2012-01-01 21:11:26I love it but its kinda hard to read and if you wanna know why read the 1st comment oh BTW i gave it a thumbs up (thats what i call it because
