2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-09 00:04:07Instead of criticizing other peoples work maybe the writer of the previous comment should show us an example of their work.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 15:12:23AWFUL!!! If part i of the story is as bad as part 2, I am certainly glad that I didn’t read it.«1» I gave up trying to read this garbage after the first poorly written paragraph. Xxnx Every usage of a proper noun (like a name) is capitalized. Every usage of a proper noun (like a name) is capitalized. Didn’t you ever hear of capitalizing the first word of each sentence? It is difficult to believe that this was written by an adult. It is difficult to believe that this was written by an adult. It is difficult to believe that this was written by an adult.




















