Well done and very close to what actually happens between man and wife. Xxnx your doing great. NOT! your doing great. They were each thinking of someone else while fucking each other, and you think this is what true love is about? Anal? NOT! keep up the good writing. 10/10READERReport 2007-03-24 06:44:33good story but where are the doggies!?«1» 10/10READERReport 2007-03-24 06:44:33good story but where are the doggies!?«1» (But that’s a good thing.)
The story was also very sad, and therefore not erotic. your doing great. 10/10READERReport 2007-03-24 06:44:33good story but where are the doggies!?«1» your doing great. *rolls eyes*
5/10READERReport 2007-03-28 00:33:52Great job! I know. *rolls eyes*
5/10READERReport 2007-03-28 00:33:52Great job! NOT! 10/10READERReport 2007-03-24 11:58:07what fucking dogs?READERReport 2007-03-24 08:39:31Terrific. NOT! *rolls eyes*
5/10READERReport 2007-03-28 00:33:52Great job! your doing great. NOT! (But that’s a good thing.)
The story was also very sad, and therefore not erotic.
