add some twists!READERReport 2005-01-27 22:21:38nice story i rate this as first class. xnx I like the plausible story line.READERReport 2005-04-04 17:23:27it was alright but you need to develop the plot a little more to build p excitement. I like the plausible story line.READERReport 2005-04-04 17:23:27it was alright but you need to develop the plot a little more to build p excitement. 9/10«1» add some twists!READERReport 2005-01-27 22:21:38nice story i rate this as first class. I like the plausible story line.READERReport 2005-04-04 17:23:27it was alright but you need to develop the plot a little more to build p excitement. 10/10READERReport 2005-01-27 10:18:23you’ve got the nack to be a great writer. 10/10READERReport 2005-01-27 10:18:23you’ve got the nack to be a great writer. 9/10«1» 10/10READERReport 2005-01-27 10:18:23you’ve got the nack to be a great writer.
