Your ideas will also be sharper if you refrain from using prepositional phrases at the end of the sentence. xnx In good writing that is never done. You are the champion of using the same word two or three times in the same sentence. In good writing that is never done. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2013-08-02 23:31:25Mandi, you are so talented!!! Your ideas will also be sharper if you refrain from using prepositional phrases at the end of the sentence. If we are ever planning a trip to Utah I’ll have to see if I could get you to do some pturcies for me Please BTW this is Megan’s Sister in Law Married Jeff’s lil’ brother Rob.Did I mention, your so talented!!!smiles, Kateanonymous readerReport 2013-03-11 16:01:38The friend that the wife is visiting is also a possible new character.
