30 comments«12345»nutgiverReport 2017-03-20 03:28:34THIS guy is a complete savageAnonymous readerReport 2017-02-09 15:35:12Breath is the noun. Xnxx Call me “Proofreader”. 30 comments«12345»nutgiverReport 2017-03-20 03:28:34THIS guy is a complete savageAnonymous readerReport 2017-02-09 15:35:12Breath is the noun. Bad grammar and slang usage establish local color and help develop the characters. Call me “Proofreader”. Good story, though.Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upAnonymous readerReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony. At the start of the story, in the intro when you said you “write porn with a plot” first thought to come to my mind was “you write porn with pony ass”?Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-19 14:10:51Hey “COACH” – Mark Twain would never have published if editors had your attitude. Good story, though.Anonymous readerReport 2016-11-16 14:42:02Nice job keep it upAnonymous readerReport 2016-09-03 03:31:01Sorry, I’m a Brony.
