I hope ur other works are better then this one.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-11 14:19:06hey don’t steal stories asshole! then u switched from her POV to his. Xxnx …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. I hope ur other works are better then this one.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-11 14:19:06hey don’t steal stories asshole! This is written by davidhog and is on this very site. I hope ur other works are better then this one.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-11 14:19:06hey don’t steal stories asshole! This is written by davidhog and is on this very site. This is written by davidhog and is on this very site. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-05 15:03:17You’re a shitty thief and a shittier writer.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-27 16:55:19how can you have ELDER SISTER 2 when there was no chapter 1 and stop stealing it is a felony do us all a favor and delete this
