Well not here anyway. xnx All i said was that she should describe things more, to expand some of the scenes and to have some build-up. If you’re going to write a scene like that give a reason why here friend and again describe it more, The location was also odd for it to happen, someone would have found or heard them. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. Really, you’re complaining about the spelling and grammar of a comment that you obviously had no trouble reading. Well not here anyway. So i don’t know where you got that from. You really have to work on your writing.
