Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your readers. Xxx OR maybe try again. that’s tne only comment i can add. A thumds down on this posting of your story.«1» Also, more detail in the sexual content of the story would be welcome.dragon888Report 2012-09-02 02:31:48Bbbbbbbbbboooooooooooooooooooodragon888Report 2012-09-02 02:31:15I agree and it sucked dick badanonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 03:27:46SPACING. Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your readers. A thumds down on this posting of your story.«1» Your stories are likely to improve with experience. OR maybe try again. Dividing your stories into paragraphs and separating the paragraphs with spacing will make for an easier and better experience for your readers.
