Your concept of how our criminal justice system works is flawed beyond recognition. So yeah lose all the mini stories unless your trying to lead into having a threesome or something it’s really pointless. xnx So really take to heart what a previous poster said “grammar, horrible. And who the hell is Danielle? You can only be held for criminal charges, which have nothing to do with a lawsuit. So yeah lose all the mini stories unless your trying to lead into having a threesome or something it’s really pointless. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? oh and who the fuck is danielle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-10 22:49:03The setup needs either more focus or elimination. I think your writing style sucks. punctuation, dreadful. Presentation is important.«12»
