Haa«1» You should have made him touch her or something.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 03:25:14I saecrhed a bunch of sites and this was the best.READERReport 2008-04-13 16:05:36huh :/ i got lost halfway thru the storyREADERReport 2004-11-29 10:38:24Still lovely. Xxnx I like your prose, though you reach the end a bit “fast” maybe? 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-22 11:34:31It just started. Haa«1» I like your prose, though you reach the end a bit “fast” maybe? You should have made him touch her or something.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 03:25:14I saecrhed a bunch of sites and this was the best.READERReport 2008-04-13 16:05:36huh :/ i got lost halfway thru the storyREADERReport 2004-11-29 10:38:24Still lovely. Fast. Fast. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-22 11:34:31It just started. Haa«1» Haa«1» Haa«1» I like your prose, though you reach the end a bit “fast” maybe? You should have made him touch her or something.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 03:25:14I saecrhed a bunch of sites and this was the best.READERReport 2008-04-13 16:05:36huh :/
