It’s not to often you find a story on this site where you can actually feel the emotion in it.«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-04-12 18:14:17Your writing is a bit hard to follow, especially with the lengthy run-on sentences. Xxx All you need to do is proofread your stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-21 22:37:51Quite an excellent story. I do hope you post more stories like this. All you need to do is proofread your stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-21 22:37:51Quite an excellent story. All you need to do is proofread your stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-21 22:37:51Quite an excellent story. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-04-12 18:14:17Your writing is a bit hard to follow, especially with the lengthy run-on sentences. I do hope you post more stories like this. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-04-12 18:14:17Your writing is a bit hard to follow, especially with the lengthy run-on sentences. All you need to do is proofread your stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-21 22:37:51Quite an excellent story.
