.Master_of_1Report 2012-01-01 17:21:48Very nice try but go at it again take ur time in ur writinganonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 03:18:56Wow Ive never seen so many people bitch about mistakes back the fuck off I read it just fine. Xnxx It lacked description and flow and of course your use of the English language was attrocious. Urfantasyman92 it was a good start a little short but I liked don’t let the spelling police keep u from making a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-12-30 05:17:10I have to agree with one of the comments. It lacked description and flow and of course your use of the English language was attrocious. Learn to read and write English before you attempt another story. I would give the story less than 1 out of 10anonymous readerReport 2011-12-21 13:48:45HAVING SEX WITH UR MUM OR FAMILY MEMBER CAN RUIN UR RELATIONSHIP END UP REGRATING REST OF UR LIFE OUT OF
