Otherwise, awesome.Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-28 20:28:48Halfway through the first chapter and there are so many contradictions it’s fucking ridiculous!!!? Xxx There is NOTHING bland about THIGH high socks unless they are under long pants!Anonymous readerReport 2016-02-28 20:14:11Halfway through the first chapter and there are so many contradictions it’s fucking ridiculous!!!? Timid and shy yet down to earth!!? Grammr and Spell check, plus add more paragraph spacing. Dresses in a bland manner yet wears THIGH HIGH SOCKS!! Timid and shy yet down to earth!!? Here’s the kicker does NOT cover it!!! Here’s the kicker does NOT cover it!!! as is this is unreadable delete at once and stop writing until you learn to do it properly.«123» 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-03-11 06:12:09You’re an amazing writer, so keep doing this, please.
