The content is good but the manner in which it is presented is pitiful. That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. xnx The writing errors detracted from the story.«1» It’s too mushy, too childish, and it’s probably all bullshit. That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. 3 comments«1»READERReport 2007-09-15 15:57:00Over 13,000 viewers and only 2 now 3 comments. It’s too mushy, too childish, and it’s probably all bullshit. Gave it a 5.READERReport 2005-12-23 14:35:21That was a lovely storey and now I want to find the other ones
by this talented young lady – she has already made my pussy all wet and longing for her tongue! That should tell the writer something–That the story is not a good one. Gave it a 5.READERReport 2005-12-23 14:35:21That was a lovely storey and now I want to find the other ones
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