Huge difference mostly good. Xxnx He seems to also to be able to talk to his mom and dad. You show signs of a good writer. Leave kc and zoey non sexual, unless you bump it up a few years later on. No intercourse at least until kc is 14. Mom, Dad, Julie Jim, Kc or Zoey. I would like to see him make peace get counseling and then fuck the female counselor. I wish you had written Zoey in as the oldest. Understandable, well spaced, etc etc. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-03 06:59:35It suckled just joking I loved it just work on your spacing keep writtingJiggajamesReport 2011-07-21 22:36:57I’m going to wait on zoey and kc for two more chapters probably 2 or 3 years ahead yeah I did get my years wrong badly but this is me starting out on story 3 it will probably be out between
