And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. xnx 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-07-09 06:13:22Keep on writing, interesting as a wholeREADERReport 2005-02-23 11:08:55My 8″ strap on will really make you wet.READERReport 2005-01-06 07:30:20THIS SHIT SUCKS WORST THEN A HARRY POTTER BOOK!READERReport 2004-10-12 10:51:37Great story. It’s easy giving remarks, isn’t it?READERReport 2004-10-03 21:39:07English is obviously not your first language is it? And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. It’s easy giving remarks, isn’t it?READERReport 2004-10-03 21:39:07English is obviously not your first language is it? Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1» It’s easy giving remarks, isn’t it?READERReport 2004-10-03 21:39:07English is obviously not your first language is it?
