This story has definite potential. Xnxx 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker . . … This story has definite potential. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … but dude do write the next the story ha a lot of potential . . … i give it a 7 .. (most writers at this site treat description like a drivers license with bra/penis size. i give it a 7 .. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can bullshit convincingly) There was very little description of the charecters except to throw a few numbers and letters at us.
