you have great potential in these stories. Xxx instead of saying: As I pummled in out out of her hot sweet cunt, I could begin to feel the deep powerful sensation of my final orgasm building,. . . . . . . … instead of saying: As I pummled in out out of her hot sweet cunt, I could begin to feel the deep powerful sensation of my final orgasm building,. . . . . . . … keep them cumming, explore your dark side. . …«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-09-28 23:40:49not bad 8 out of 10READERReport 2006-08-24 01:45:36I agree with the reader that said complete bullshit, and everything else, bravo reader, on a lighter note i will say the stories have huge potential. you write,And just as they were losing patience with me I
yelled louder than anytime before, and forced out a load of nut
juice.READERReport 2006-08-23 10:57:23i’ve read them all so far and commrnted on a few.
