Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. xnx Thanks«1» Thanks«1» Thanks«1» 1 comments«1»podReport 2009-04-03 10:16:19Much better than Part 1. Thanks«1» Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”. Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”. Please use your spelling checker, “tounge ring”. Make a point of leaving the story for a day or two and then proofread it; “too much to a bare” should have been “too much to bear”. 1 comments«1»podReport 2009-04-03 10:16:19Much better than Part 1.
