6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-10 19:42:28loved your writing. …!!! Xxnx Very little spelling, words and grammar errors found. #MOUNTAIN TOAD SAGE.Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-18 10:07:32Bhoooo you suckAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-29 09:50:58Amazing. That’s why I’m taking my time between chapters right now, I want the story to unfold properly and with quality that a rush job would ruin. That’s why I’m taking my time between chapters right now, I want the story to unfold properly and with quality that a rush job would ruin. When the characters talk I want them to sound like real people, not William Shatner. Under the hand of pure amateur, the avatar and seeking would have become rubbish. The way you explain avatar and journey of seeking was good. This particular tale came to me right before I started to write it, and I’m letting the story flow and direct itself instead of forcing it.
