but as much as id hate to admit it. Hair color and/or style? Xxnx Hair color and/or style? 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 02:12:03Other than such comments mentioned I think you need to work on character design, ok we get it the girl is goth and she is wearing a nice dress, what does she look like? Age? it was perfect for a short little smut story. Its a little labor intensive to read the way it is now. it was perfect for a short little smut story. What did the dress look like? 5/10anonymous readerReport 2010-10-01 19:00:05whats up with the name andrea in both of your stories?Hungstud69Report 2009-12-08 17:00:48Great story! passable. Its a little labor intensive to read the way it is now. passable. Also if you plan on doing more beastiality I would like to note that a dogs knot takes about ten minutes to soften before it
