If I’d seen a rape tag on it I wouldn’t have read it, but, wow. The scarf was a fantastic touch. Xxx 4 comments«1»Eron the RelentlessReport 2009-11-22 05:03:08Very hot story,but lacking details.You went too fast towards goal imo.launchdirectorReport 2009-11-19 12:46:20This was short, but white hot. Example:
“Elizabeth, have you been drinking?”
“No, Mr. I wish there had been more descriptions of how she felt, and how they looked.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-17 23:02:23Godd story, but a little confusing. I wish there had been more descriptions of how she felt, and how they looked.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-17 23:02:23Godd story, but a little confusing. Basic engllsh rules: If 2 people are in a conversation, start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. The scarf was a fantastic touch. If I’d seen a rape tag on it I wouldn’t have read it, but, wow. I wish there had been more descriptions of how she felt, and how
