and i like how detailed you get about your characters sexual sensations, but a lot of them are common to a few of your stories, so maybe you could look for a new way to describe pleasure? i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10’s. Xxnx i look foward to reading anything you post in the future. Keep up the awesome wrk!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-24 04:49:44i really like all yo storiesAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-12 21:48:07That was an amazing story…you are a really good author. i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10’s. the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny
