It is a good story, is that actually 1st person? Xxnx But everyone is making comments with numbers instead of words, make sure your house is in order before you go looking at other houses. Wizardbill69«12» There are a lot of you and yours in there for 1st person. However, you’re right on your other points. Wizardbill69«12» The grammar and spelling in this story are utterly atrocious.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-08 19:15:24I agree, the spelling isn’t the best. There are a lot of you and yours in there for 1st person. There are a lot of you and yours in there for 1st person. It is a good story, is that actually 1st person? The grammar and spelling in this story are utterly atrocious.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-08 19:15:24I agree, the spelling isn’t the best.
