I did a longer comment but we had a Europe- US moment and they said i used Bad Words. Xxnx Should have taken some basic writing classes. !anonymous readerReport 2011-09-25 14:27:04NIce story but needs a lot of work in Capitalization and Spelling, maybe you should think of an Editor prior to sending your stories«1» Should have taken some basic writing classes. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 19:45:08Good Story; Needs Part Two. This site said I used Bad Words. So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. Story even though had potential sucked hard!
