those are two of a large number of mistakes that I read in about the first 3 paragraphs.«1» I highly recoment putting your story into a program like ms-word and have the spell/grammer checker turned on, then just copy and paste to this sight. . Xxx … proof read not prove. …then in your story Dust of Two days not Dust of wo days. … 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 10:56:354celKy Fresh thoughts, fresh view on the subject..!anonymous readerReport 2011-12-22 07:27:32Thank you for your comment. in your second line… I highly recoment putting your story into a program like ms-word and have the spell/grammer checker turned on, then just copy and paste to this sight. . … The problem is that if I use the spell checker this story will come out completely clean, because it is not the case that the words spelling is incorrect, they are just the wrong words. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12
