Needs expansion.MR.koolReport 2011-04-07 18:56:13Nice job Blue Heat…i absolutely love it like all your stories..please continue… 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-05 11:25:36Need to learn when to use, “me” and “I”.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 16:20:38Nice story, but it ends to quick. Xxnx Needs expansion.MR.koolReport 2011-04-07 18:56:13Nice job Blue Heat…i absolutely love it like all your stories..please continue… 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-05 11:25:36Need to learn when to use, “me” and “I”.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 16:20:38Nice story, but it ends to quick. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-05 11:25:36Need to learn when to use, “me” and “I”.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 16:20:38Nice story, but it ends to quick. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-05 11:25:36Need to learn when to use, “me” and “I”.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 16:20:38Nice story, but it ends to quick. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-05 11:25:36Need to learn when to use, “me” and “I”.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-08 16:20:38Nice story, but it ends to quick.
