A build up to what? Xxx NOTHING!! A build up to what? A build up to what? NOTHING!! this is the worst peice of shit i have ever seen. Do us all a favor..put the pen down and go have some real sex…then maybe you can write about it.READERReport 2005-01-04 06:45:09rubish shitREADERReport 2004-12-28 00:03:24too many damn words. a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» 11 comments«123»READERReport 2005-11-11 14:47:54Your story blew! Less talkin, more action. . … I skipped over everything. 11 comments«123»READERReport 2005-11-11 14:47:54Your story blew! a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit.«123» 11 comments«123»READERReport 2005-11-11 14:47:54Your story blew!




















