you have great potential in these stories. Xxnx keep them cumming, explore your dark side. . …«1» keep them cumming, explore your dark side. . …«1» keep them cumming, explore your dark side. . …«1» you have great potential in these stories. keep them cumming, explore your dark side. . …«1» also you might want to describe your penis that you hold in such high regard to make it seem more descriptive and attentive however i will continue to read , all in all 6 out of 10READERReport 2006-08-24 01:32:31complete bullshit, you have a great outline and you have to ruin it by using so little description of what the character feels or the erotic, sensual potential the stories could have. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-09-28 23:40:49not bad 8 out of 10READERReport 2006-08-24 01:45:36I agree with the reader that said complete bullshit, and everything else, bravo reader, on a lighter note i will say the stories have huge potential.




















